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Title: 18th arrondissement
Author: Alex
Fandom: Crossover: Anna Karenina/Hidalgo
Pairing/Character(s): Alexei Vronsky/Frank Hopkins
Rating: PG-13
Note: Written for the [livejournal.com profile] seans_50 final challenge. So many thanks to the mods, [livejournal.com profile] govi20 and [livejournal.com profile] mooms for providing such delightful challenges. :)




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1890
Paris
The Moulin Rouge




Come in; don't be frightened. Oh, this is a place of vice and depravity, to be sure, and it's uncertain that you'll leave with your virtue intact, but you won't be bored. I guarantee it.

Here is a dark, narrow corridor lit with red-glassed candles, filled with a muted roar of frenzied revelry. The passage comes to an end at a heavy crimson velvet curtain, and opens onto a chaos of laughter both drunken and sober; of groups of men in white waistcoats and shirtfronts, packs of wolves in tailored wool; of ladies in bustled gowns, jewels on their ears, necks, and wrists flashing like signal lamps; of waiters dressed as devils and acrobats costumed as angels; of fleshy beauties with painted lips and feathers in their hair, dancing like gauzy butterflies to the cacophony of a hidden orchestra. The dresses of the dancing girls, saucily flipped upward, reveal foaming ruffles and daring striped stockings rolled just above the knee. The men in white waistcoats and shirtfronts let out raucous howls, pounding on the tables in enthusiastic approval.

You see that man? That lone man at the small table on the edge of the dance floor. He wears fringed buckskin trousers and worn boots, his sharp jaw is unshaven, and his blond hair disheveled. A bottle of brandy, the house's cheapest, sits on the table, uncorked and three-quarters full. His grey eyes are not yet unfocused, though he has spent each evening for a week at this table, and if previous nights are an indication of things to come, they soon will be. He is an American, a cowboy, an entertainer, and a curiosity in this most cosmopolitan of cities, and he cares nothing for sophisticated Parisians nor their elegant scrutiny. For this reason, he is more sought-after than ever, but tonight he has refused companionship and divides his attention between the floor show and the only other lone man in the place.

The object of the cowboy's regard is there – a few tables over. That lean, handsome man in evening dress like most other men present, but look at him. He's set apart by a bearing that is military in its straightness, and an expression of quiet despair. He too has a bottle upon the table, a clear bottle set in a silver bucket of ice. Every so often the man pours a transparent, syrupy liquid from the bottle into a tiny glass, and tosses it back as if it were a bad-tasting medicine.

The cowboy watches him closely now, his eyes traversing the man's face, his slender body. Every gesture is wearily graceful; his face is empty. Gradually, though, he becomes aware of the cowboy's gaze, and looks up. A faint smile curves his lips, and he raises his glass in a toast. The cowboy returns the salute.

For a week this little game has continued. I haven't placed a bet on the outcome, but it seems certain nonetheless, n'est-ce pas?

Ah, there. Three more drinks, and the cowboy picks up his bottle and stands, oblivious to the interested glances of those around him, and makes his way to the next table. The lean, handsome man – he is a count, they say, a Russian, and a war hero – gazes at him thoughtfully and, in fluent and idiomatic French – admirable in a foreigner – invites him to sit. The cowboy shakes his head and shrugs, and the count repeats his offer in English. The cowboy nods now, understanding, and sits. They watch the floor show together, occasionally speaking into each other's ear.

An hour goes by, then two. The contents of their respective bottles diminish. At last they stand and make their way toward the back rooms. You know about the back rooms, do you not? Ah well, perhaps I had better not shock you. You look easily offended, my friend. Let us simply say that there are delights in those rooms to tempt the most jaundiced appetites.

Time passes; the crowd dwindles. The first birds of Montmartre are singing in the chestnut trees when the two men emerge. Slightly worse for wear, you ask? Ah, I cannot say. You prefer discretion, I think. No, you're right; perfectly tawdry to speculate, to gossip. But I will venture to remark upon this: they appear happier, or at least content for the moment, and their parting glance is an affectionate one.

A pity it won't last. The cowboy returns to America next week, I hear, and the count? Well, who knows. He speaks to so few people. A true enigma. But he looks happy now, non? He smiles.

Don't judge, my friend. Don't condemn. Happiness is fleeting enough, in these troubled times. We must cling to life and its little pleasures when and where we can.


End.


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Date: 2010-04-18 06:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] govi20.livejournal.com
What an amazing pairing and an even more amazing fic. I love it, Alex, love the scenery, the men, the feel. I am so thrilled I can't tell you how much!

Time passes; the crowd dwindles. The first birds of Montmartre are singing in the chestnut trees when the two men emerge. Slightly worse for wear, you ask? Ah, I cannot say. You prefer discretion, I think. No, you're right; perfectly tawdry to speculate, to gossip. But I will venture to remark upon this: they appear happier, or at least content for the moment, and their parting glance is an affectionate one.

I can only say stunning. Thank you so much for this!

Date: 2010-04-18 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
Oh, you liked it? I'm so happy, dear! *hug* It's not what I'd ordinarily do, but it was fun. I think I shall have to play with those two again. Thanks ever so much, and THANK YOU for [livejournal.com profile] seans_50 - it's a wonderful, wonderful comm! *big hugs*

Date: 2010-04-18 07:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] govi20.livejournal.com
It's so different and I really love it. I think it's marvellous and I do hope you'll play with them again...

Date: 2010-04-18 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
I really hope to. Thank you, you're so sweet. :D

Date: 2010-04-18 08:01 am (UTC)
eve_n_furter: (P'Gell - wink)
From: [personal profile] eve_n_furter
This ^. That was sweeet.

Date: 2010-04-18 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Date: 2010-04-18 08:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com
Ah well, perhaps I had better not shock you. You look easily offended, my friend

LOOKS CAN BE DECEIVING PLEASE SHOCK ME OH GOD SHOCK ME HARD

heh. loved this!

Date: 2010-04-18 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
No! I must preserve your virgin ears!

Hee.

Thank you, I'm so happy you liked it!

Date: 2010-04-18 08:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alex-quine.livejournal.com
The narrator's voice is another very distinct character which complements the setting, teases, giving information and then with-holding it. great fun and of course we want to see into the back room, but you don't always get what you want and a little denial adds appetite...
thanks for sharing.

Date: 2010-04-18 10:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
The narrator was actually more or less added halfway through - I didn't want to do third person limited, but it felt distant as it was. I'm so glad it worked. Thank you!

Date: 2010-04-18 04:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kimberlite.livejournal.com
OMG, Vince, this is fabulous! I adore how your descriptions create the Moulin Rouge as vividly as the film, and then you go and pair these two men so skillfully. Guh! This is perfect as is, but I'd also greedily love to see these guys together again. :)

Date: 2010-04-18 10:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
OMG, Vince, it was 10:45 last night and I was in complete panic mode. I was wandering around and looked in my closet where my DVDs are kept, and I saw the movie, and it clicked into place. I'm so glad you liked it! I'll definitely have to play with the pair of them again. :D

Date: 2010-04-18 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com
I love the narrative voice in this, I really do. It's quite spellbinding (and very Toulouse-Lautrec). I love the whole image, of how Frank and Vronsky gravitate towards one another, and the comfort they take. And while I know the characters and setting are pretty close to each other in historical placement, I can't help but get the sense here that Moulin Rouge is almost acting as a waystation for drifting souls from any era, linear time notwithstanding (which, you know, you can take as a gentle hint that it'd be really great to see you use the setting for other characters, or the same ones again, cough cough). ^_~
Edited Date: 2010-04-18 05:24 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-04-18 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
I was telling Alex Quine that the narrator was actually added about halfway through because the perspective I was using felt flat. So I'm thrilled it worked.

And I'm totally intrigued by your notion of the Moulin Rouge as a waystation for drifting souls - what a cool way to put it, and such a brilliant idea. I only saw that, at first, in the vaguest terms, but it could work so well. Maybe we should do some sort of ficfest involving that sometime!

Date: 2010-04-21 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com
Maybe we should do some sort of ficfest involving that sometime!
That is a fantastic idea! I would totally be behind that. ^_^

Date: 2010-04-18 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peersrogue.livejournal.com
Amazing - loved the clever way you used the narrator. A world weary voice that has seen it all but is not yet completely cynical. This for me anchors it beautifully and gives a certain a 'je ne sais quoi.'

Date: 2010-04-18 10:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
I'm so glad the idea of the narrator worked! I hadn't initially thought of using it, but by and by the notion occurred, and the piece came together. Thank you so much for your very kind words!

Date: 2010-04-18 10:51 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Bean full stare)
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
Oh, the narrator makes this even more gorgeous (and somehow both tawdry and heartbreaking)... what a wonderful conceit! And I can't help picturing John Leguizamo's Toulouse-Lautrec, leaning close and cynical to your ear, unsurprised and yet sympathetic.

And the pairing--perfect! Two lonely men, cast adrift from everything they know and everything they are, coming together in the one city that will neither judge nor flaunt them, the one place that might understand.

It's just a gorgeous read--thank you!

~Kris

Date: 2010-04-18 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for your gorgeous and kind comments! I was about halfway through the story and it felt a bit flat, so I added the concept of the narrator, and it seemed to fall into place. And I was humming "Nature Boy" throughout, I admit.

I'm so pleased that you liked the pairing! And as [livejournal.com profile] caras_galadhon notes above, the Moulin Rouge and Paris itself is a little bit out of ordinary time. Thank you again, I'm delighted you enjoyed it!

Date: 2010-04-18 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eglvm.livejournal.com
OMG, this is so special. The way it's written is fabulous. And all the little descriptions and details are lovely. And such a great pairing. I think you should write more of this. I actually ship them now. ;D

Date: 2010-04-18 11:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you - how nice of you to say that. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece, and the pairing. It's very tempting, so I may write the two of them again some time. Thanks for your generous comments!

Date: 2010-04-19 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hurinhouse.livejournal.com
bravo! i've never seen moulin rouge, so i don't know how much of this has to do with that. but this is such a unique story-telling type structure, just delightful. the snatches of backpeddled insight re: alexei & frank are brilliant. thank you so much for sharing this.

Date: 2010-04-19 03:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you! I only tried to capture the mood of the club, nothing else. It relies on paintings and descriptions as much as it does the movie. :D I'm really pleased you enjoyed the structure! Thank you very, very much.

Date: 2010-04-19 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-flattermann.livejournal.com
Willkommen, Bienvenue, Welcome - or rather "WELL DONE!" I love it. All fits together so smoothly, perfectly. I've read the other comments. In one you said, that you added the commentator later because it felt flat. I can believe this. The commentator is perfect for this setting. Just so like "Cabaret". Applause, applause, da capo! *standing ovation*

Date: 2010-04-19 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
Cabaret is one of my favorite films. :D Yes, I had started the story without the narrator, and it felt flat and oddly distant. I needed a way to make it more intimate, and that sort of did the trick. Thanks for your very kind words - I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2010-04-23 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrkinch.livejournal.com
Mmmmm, lovely. I really like seeing them from outside like that, knowing nothing for certain and able to imagine anything!

Date: 2010-04-23 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm glad the form worked for you. Thank you for telling me!

Date: 2010-04-23 09:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] foxrafer.livejournal.com
This style and perspective is really effective here, it shoves you into a true observer sitting in the room watching the game in front of you. Love the idea of the cowboy being exotic in a French salon, and the no fuss no muss way they came together.

Date: 2010-04-24 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
I'm glad it felt effective, thanks so much! :)

Date: 2010-04-23 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com
What an original pairing and the Moulin Rouge setting with narrator works beautifully!

Date: 2010-04-24 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
I'm really pleased you liked it! Thank you. :D

Date: 2010-04-26 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meb28.livejournal.com
Beautiful! I love how you took a third and perhaps fourth party and wound out your story from their eyes. Awesome! Loved every second! Thank you for sharing.

Date: 2010-04-26 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. :)

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