splix: (qui-gon/obi-wan)
splix ([personal profile] splix) wrote2011-09-12 01:12 pm
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FIC: Companionship [drabble]

Title: Companionship
Author: Alex
Fandom: TPM
Pairing/Characters: Qui-Gon/Obi-Wan
Rating: PG
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: characters property of their respective owners.
Warnings: None.




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“Looking for a good time, sir?” The Twi’lek, limbs and tails artfully painted, pressed the length of her body against Obi-Wan’s.

“Not tonight, my dear.” Obi-Wan touched gentle fingertips to her cheek and slipped out of the cantina into the cold night air, making for the sloping hills.

There were nights when temptation beckoned, when the touch of another warm body would have comforted his vast loneliness. He lay in his solitary bed, waiting for sleep to claim him. At times, he dreamed of Qui-Gon trailing kisses down his spine, on his mouth.

For now, it would have to do.


End.


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[identity profile] sandspirit.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
*sniff* Oh, thanks for this, I needed a Q/O drabble. Beautifully done, I love all the vivid details.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 08:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I'm really pleased that you like it. :)

[identity profile] the-little-owl.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 08:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, poor lonely Obi-Wan! But it's nice to see another drabble written by you.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! I know he communed with Qui-Gon, but who knows how often, or whether there was any more physical manifestation? Thanks again.

[identity profile] the-little-owl.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Since even LucasFilms in their Clone Wars cartoon made Qui-Gon appear, I hope very much that Qui-Gon didn't let Obi-Wan sitting alone in the desert all the time :>)

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I hope so too! :)

[identity profile] bellona-rpg.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 09:24 pm (UTC)(link)
A lovely little piece, and I liked the picture too. Thank you for posting them! :)

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much indeed! :D

[identity profile] obi-ki.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
very nice--we all know that Qui-Gon appears to Obi-Wan on Tatooine way more that we see in the comics, films or books

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

we all know that Qui-Gon appears to Obi-Wan on Tatooine way more that we see in the comics, films or books

It's comforting to think so, I agree. :)

[identity profile] hsv-fangirl.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 10:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh gosh...so lovely and soft. Sad but also so wonderful that his love for Qui is still so present in his heart that he would turn down being intimate with another. I love that of course!
xx

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the wonderful remarks. :)
ext_25473: my default default (Qui/Obi)

[identity profile] lauramcewan.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
*sniffle* I love Obi-Wan on Tattooine...

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
So do I! That seems to be my default lately. I need to start getting back to Qui-Gon at some point, though!

[identity profile] franky-cook.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad to see you still write for TPM fandom. Always happy to read your stuff!

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

[identity profile] batagur.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I had forgot what this felt like: Q/O bliss. Thank you.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 11:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that's lovely! Thank you!

[identity profile] bant.livejournal.com 2011-09-17 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
Perfect description, Batagur. It's a state of being, like nirvana.

[identity profile] sneezer222.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 01:50 am (UTC)(link)
That was lovely. So sweet and sad.

{I actually SQUEED out LOUD in the store yesterday when I found Qui-Gon on a cereal box!}

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 05:24 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you! :)

My word. Was that a vintage 1999 box of cereal? What gives?

[identity profile] sneezer222.livejournal.com 2011-09-14 04:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh no, there is a set of Star Wars cereal, you have to get them all and put them together for a sort of Poster Effect. But of course I only bought the one that had Qui-Gon {though I will probably go back and get the Darth Maul one too.

I think it was Cinnamon Toast Crunch that had Qui-Gon.

[identity profile] yaoichick.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
Wonderful!! Such a bittersweet morsel you've given us. :)

I do love the fact (though sad) that Obi-Wan has contact with Qui-Gon after Qui's death. (At least, George threw us that bone!)

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 05:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, darlin'!

Yes, that was the best thing about ROTS, that little moment when Obi-Wan's eyes light up. "Qui-Gon?" Sigh!!

[identity profile] kimberlite.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
limbs and tails

Cool!

vast loneliness

So descriptive.

trailing kisses down his spine

Guh! :)

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 05:25 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, thank you, sweetness! :D

[identity profile] crazy4ew.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
ahhhhhhhhh, I miss Qui/Obi *sniff sniff*

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
I do sometimes too! It's nice to revisit once in a while. :D

[identity profile] govi20.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 09:00 am (UTC)(link)
That's a lovely, though slightly melancholic drabble.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-14 01:19 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, dear!

Ooh. I wannaBean. :D

[identity profile] govi20.livejournal.com 2011-09-14 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
You know you can always take if you like!

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-14 05:14 am (UTC)(link)
Bless you! I just might, it's so beautiful. Thank you, dear!

[identity profile] inyadreems.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely drabble. 'Tis so sad, therefore I'm hoping that you do revisit Qui-Gon and he makes an appearance. A ghostie is better than nothing.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-14 01:19 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Yes, I do need to get back to Qui-Gon at some point.

[identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com 2011-09-14 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I love the gentleness in this, in the way Obi-Wan turns her down, and how that rolls into his loneliness, and how that, too, feels gentle and...and almost faded, as if it has been there so long the sharpness of it has died down so it's simply a constant state. Which, well, makes it all the more mournful, I suppose.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-14 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. I was thinking that it was maybe ten or so years along in his exile, so he would be used to the solitude, but maybe not completely comfortable with it. So your assessment is about perfect, I think. Thank you for your lovely comment.

i harth darth will never not be great. :D

[identity profile] bant.livejournal.com 2011-09-17 02:16 am (UTC)(link)
I always love it when you post.

You captured so much in that moment. A lifetime of lonliness and endurance in 100 words.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-18 03:54 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you! That's so nice of you. :D

Excellent icon. Drapey hands!

[identity profile] nerowill.livejournal.com 2011-09-18 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
*sniff* So sad but lovely.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-18 08:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! :D

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2011-09-20 07:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! :)