Oh, that was wonderful, wonderful! I grinned at "I consider myself a modern, experimental sort of fellow" -- how clearly I could hear Douglas's voice! I was startled that Martin went directly to disrobing without foreplay and then was fascinated by the way you laid out what that had meant for him and how Douglas was going to change that. It was a relief to know that Martin actually does enjoy bottoming. Ha, loved Douglas having Carolyn's voice in his head during a moment one does not want Carolyn's voice in one's head. :-) It was magical the way you brought us up to the beginning of MJN Air, but with such a different origin story. So much history already between the four of them. And the mention of Stockholm Syndrome again reminded me of the many metatextual touches you've put in this fic.
This story was a great big romp. Thank you so much. It must have been a lot of work, and yet it reads as though it must have been a great pleasure to write.
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Date: 2013-12-12 04:10 am (UTC)This story was a great big romp. Thank you so much. It must have been a lot of work, and yet it reads as though it must have been a great pleasure to write.