Getting Sherlock to sound like himself must be difficult, but you handled it beautifully. The bullying was brutally realistic and gave me that awful feeling of impotent rage that such a thing could happen. *grrr* I loved Violet and her pride in and devotion to her children. The moment Sherlock realized he had a say in his future was brilliant. :)
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Date: 2012-04-25 12:10 am (UTC)