Love, love, love that we got Martin's perspective on the hand-holding. It was one of my favorite moments from the last chapter, and it just broke my heart, especially since I had a bit of a feeling Martin might internalize Douglas's reaction to the leaflet and turn it into something it wasn't, something to tear him down even more. Beautifully painful.
Thank you, thank you! Third person limited perspective is my usual style, and it can be both blessing and curse, so every once in a while I like to mirror a bit. I'm really glad you liked that. :)
It's so much fun writing Douglas lines. Finnemore is a genius for creating these characters. :D
Awwww....*beams* That is so sweet of you. Thank you. <3
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Date: 2012-04-18 10:32 pm (UTC)Thank you, thank you! Third person limited perspective is my usual style, and it can be both blessing and curse, so every once in a while I like to mirror a bit. I'm really glad you liked that. :)
It's so much fun writing Douglas lines. Finnemore is a genius for creating these characters. :D
Awwww....*beams* That is so sweet of you. Thank you. <3