beautiful. raw and edgy and filthy and brilliant. i love the language and tone you use in this, loved the images of the streets. the description of michaeli was so well done and ranuccio - drawn absolutely spot on.
though all here love that gorgeous sailor, i really liked that you didn't have ranuccio falling for him - loyalty to one's otp sometimes doesn't serve the muse - congrats.
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Date: 2010-03-05 07:12 pm (UTC)though all here love that gorgeous sailor, i really liked that you didn't have ranuccio falling for him - loyalty to one's otp sometimes doesn't serve the muse - congrats.