Even with the more, er, carnal bits and the thread of humor, the prose still has this almost elegant feel to it, sort of as if Obi-Wan's voice was shaping it all... though, as nice as it is to get such a well-written story, the carnal bits and humor were much appreciated, too. ;) BDSM isn't really my thing, but it never seems to matter much when it's one of your stories, missy, so I'm glad you got to share with the rest of the class!
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Date: 2010-02-18 03:35 am (UTC)