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splix ([personal profile] splix) wrote2009-06-04 08:46 am

Fic: Sharpe's Demon

Title: Sharpe's Demon
Crossover: Sharpe/The Prophecy
Pairing: Lucifer/Sharpe
Rating: NC-17
Author: Alex
Word Count: 1500
Warning: Whimsy.
Beta: the always excellent [livejournal.com profile] kimberlite.
Disclaimer: No profit made, no harm intended.
Note: My final contribution to [livejournal.com profile] sons_of_gondor's Reflections: Fifty Days of Sean.
Summary: Some souls are more stubborn than others.






Seringapatam, 1799


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The stench of battle drifted in through the window, a noxious compound of black powder, smoke, blood, and rotting flesh. Decay occurred quickly in Seringapatam, almost too quickly even for the ravenous vultures, who circled lazily before landing amidst the carnage, knowing their bellies would be well-filled. Richard Sharpe ignored the smells, the cries of the wounded, and the harsh caws of the birds. He was too busy shoveling in his dinner with one hand and fingering his new store of gems with the other. He’d already traded a small but very pretty pink pearl in exchange for an evening with an Indian lass, a gorgeous creature who’d bathed him thoroughly and anointed him with sweet oils. Good to know that commerce remained strong even in times of strife.

Sharpe scooped up the last mouthful of lamb and vegetables in a rich sauce and washed it down with a deep draught of arrack. He leaned back against the wall, belched contentedly, and closed his eyes.

“How’s the lamb, Dickie?”

Sharpe leapt to his feet, grabbing for his stolen sword and scattering a handful of jewels across the floor. He squinted into the darkness beyond the feeble light of his single candle. “Who’s there? Who the bleeding hell are you? Come out before I empty your guts on the floor!” His heart pounded like a sledge as a dark figure detached itself from the shadows and took a step forward. Sharpe had been eating and drinking blissfully for nearly half an hour without noticing anyone watching. “How long have you been skulking about there?”

“Which question do you want me to answer first?”

“Both of them,” Sharpe snarled. “But first I want you to get into the bloody light so I can see you.” The figure stepped into the candlelight. He was pale, bearded, with glittering eyes. He wore a black wool coat that reminded Sharpe of the succession of Methodist ministers that had paraded through the foundling home he’d occupied as a nipper. They’d been free with their fists, for all they’d proclaimed to be men of God. Sharpe scowled in instinctive dislike. “Get your hands up, you bastard.”

The man bared his teeth in a grin and raised his hands palm-out. In the dim illumination of the candle, they looked smooth, almost burnished. “What was the first question?”

“Who are you? And wipe that smile off your face before I do it for you.”

“Nobody important. A traveler. A thief. A beggar. A stranger in a strange land. Like yourself.”

Sharpe narrowed his gaze. “What are you doing in Seringapatam?”

The smile widened. “Collecting spoils. Also like yourself.” The stranger patted his pocket, then lifted his hand again.

The man was entirely too comfortable. By all rights any fellow with a keen-edged steel blade a handspan from his heart ought to be at least a little apprehensive. “Spoils, eh? Let’s have them, then. Go on – empty your pockets.”

“Ah. My spoils aren’t precisely what you’d call tangible. And even if they were, you wouldn’t be interested in them.” He began to sing off-key. “No glory I covet, no riches I want; ambition is nothing to me –“

“Shut up!” Sharpe hated when people used words he couldn’t understand. “Don’t be so sure of that. Do it. Now.”

The stranger shrugged, then obediently turned his pockets inside out. They were empty.

Frustrated, Sharpe jabbed the sword close to the man’s chest. “All right, where are you hiding them – up your arse?”

“Now there’s a thought,” the man said. “Don’t worry, Dickie. My pockets and my bumhole are both empty. Lucky you.” His eyes gleamed with malicious good humor.

Sharpe had had enough parleying. He stepped close to the stranger and rested the tip of the blade against the man’s throat. “Listen to me, you sodding bastard. You tell me how you know my name, and you tell me this instant.”

The man reached up and wrapped his hand, marred with blackened and broken fingernails, around the blade, and wrenched it out of Sharpe’s grip with no apparent effort and oddest of all, no blood. He laid his free hand on Sharpe’s shoulder and bore down.

The hand was hot, and felt as heavy as an anvil. Sharpe found himself on his knees, scarcely able to move, helplessly staring into the stranger’s brilliant eyes. They were blue, with flecks of gold that seemed to dance and swirl in the flickering light. Dimly, he heard the sword clatter to the floor, but couldn’t rouse himself to grope toward it.

“I know everything about you, Dickie. I know your mother was a prostitute from Cat Lane who gave birth to you when she was sixteen. Your father was a farrier, ugly as sin.” A laugh bubbled up from the stranger’s chest, and he put his lips next to Sharpe’s ear. “He had a tendency toward early completion, and most of your erstwhile brothers and sisters wound up sliding down the soft-skinned inner thighs of an assortment of London whores. You were the only one who took. Imagine that.

“I know you joined the Havercakes thanks to the efforts of Obadiah Hakeswill – not a personal friend of mine yet, but he’ll be in my pocket soon enough. I know he’s the reason your back looks like a plowed field. I know that you killed the Tippoo Sultan and stole that pretty red ruby you were fondling a few moments ago.” He stroked hot fingertips down the side of Sharpe’s face. “What I don’t quite know...Dickie...is why I can’t lay claim to you the way I’d like to. You’re not like the rest of the talking monkeys. You have all the makings of one of the hellbound, but you keep eluding me. Why is that? You haven’t said a prayer since you were five. You thieve and lie when it suits you. You’ve committed murder. And yet He seems to be saving you for some purpose. Ever receive a divine visitation, Dickie?”

“I haven’t the first bleeding idea what you’re talking about, but I’ll tell you this: no one claims me.” The words seemed dredged out of the pit of Sharpe’s belly. The man’s strength was terrifying, and his voice was as softly insinuating as a drift of opium smoke. And yet, rather than being frightened, Sharpe found himself enrapt. “No one.”

“Don’t wager your soul on it.” The stranger’s mouth descended on Sharpe’s, and it was sweeter than honey. His hand drifted to the front of Sharpe’s trousers, unerringly locating his stirring erection. Slowly, he guided Sharpe down until he was flat on his back atop his bedroll. He drew off the tattered red jacket, the worn boots, the bloodied shirt and trousers until Sharpe was entirely naked.

Sharpe knew he should fight, but that mouth felt so wet and soft and warm, and the sensation of fingertips brushing across his bare skin doubled, trebled, quadrupled, until he trembled and writhed under the stranger’s touch, crying out hoarsely. There were a hundred hands stroking him, a hundred mouths lapping at his naked flesh. At last he surrendered to the stranger’s hands with a deep, shuddering groan, shocks coursing through his body.

*

When he awoke, the stranger was staring at him. A thin moonbeam shone into the window, alchemizing sunburnt skin to pale marble. Sharpe gathered his shirt up and covered himself. “Thought you’d gone.”

“Do you have any idea what you’ve just done?”

Sharpe was confused. “Let you suck me.”

The man laughed. “I haven’t touched one of your kind in...in a long time. I’m surprised you survived.”

“Go on, you weren’t that good,” Sharpe snorted. “There were a lass in Sheffield who –“

“Shut up.” The man rose to his feet. “You’re right – I can’t claim you yet. Someone thinks you’re a soul worth saving. I have my doubts. You’re almost savage; I can’t fathom it. But I’ll be watching you. Open your hand.” Sharpe reluctantly put his hand out. The man pressed something hard into it, and folded Sharpe’s hand closed. “Think about it. I can give you riches...pleasures...power. You’d be most formidable in a different army.” He backed toward the moonlit window. “But remember – you’d be all mine. Body and soul.”

Sharpe frowned. He’d taken the King’s shilling; he was owned enough. “Not bloody likely. Who the devil are you, anyroads?”

The man grinned. “Exactly. Goodbye, Dickie. We'll meet again sometime.” The moon fell behind a cloud, and the room went utterly dark.

A frantic noise as of dozens of flapping wings arose from the window. Sharpe rose on unsteady legs and rushed to it, but the man had gone. Sharpe shook his head; bad arrack. Like as not he’d be sick for days.

The moon emerged from behind the cloud, and feeble light spilled back into the room. Sharpe opened his hand and gasped at the sight of a diamond the size of a robin’s egg. Stunned, he moved back to the window and peered into the foul-smelling night, but there was no sign of Sharpe’s demon.



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[identity profile] govi20.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 03:00 pm (UTC)(link)
That was awesome! What a delicious surprise... I love the pairing; they are great together. I especially like thatclever, cunning Lucifer can't get what he want from Sharpe.

“Go on, you weren’t that good,” Sharpe snorted. “There were a lass in Sheffield who –“ *laughs*

Writtem brilliantly, thank you so much for sharing!

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 03:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooee, I'm so glad you liked it! It kind of came out of nowhere, and I had a lot of fun writing it. Thanks so much for your great feedback! :D

[identity profile] alex-quine.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 03:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't know the second film, but this is a powerful scene, filled with an atmosphere of decay, even in the luxury of the gems fouled with blood and dirt, and of frustration - your Lucifer is baffled, almost blocked in his desires, whilst your Sharpe is operating on a level both more animal, more instinctual and more pure, less calculating. Intriguing stuff. thanks for posting.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I recommend seeing The Prophecy, if only to be baffled and amused by Christopher Walken's utter weirdness. Viggo's only in the film for five, ten minutes at most, but he makes a decided impression. His Lucifer comes across as a schemer and manipulator, and I thought that would make an interesting contrast to a very young and still somewhat wild Sharpe.

Thanks so much for commenting - I appreciate it!

[identity profile] meb28.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow! I have to admit I've never seen the Prophecy but Viggo as Lucifer is an interesting reason to. This story was awesome. I liked the way Lucifer is trying to claim Sharpe and Sharpe insists he won't be claimed by anyone. An intriguing story. I liked it. Thanks for sharing.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 04:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Viggo makes a swell Lucifer, even though he's only in the movie for a few minutes. It's a really freaky film, though. I'm glad you liked the fic - thanks so much for commenting!

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[identity profile] izzardwizzard.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! I love fic at lunchtime when I should be out exercising. I like the feral, appetite-driven Sharpe. Viggo is so strongly Aragorn/Frank Morgan/Walker Jerome in my mind I have a hard time seeing him as Lucifer, but I like his slightly amused frustration here. Sharpe is indeed a confounding character in that respect. :)

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, "feral, appetite-driven" is a good way to describe young Sharpe. Nice. If you haven't seen The Prophecy I highly recommend it - not just for Viggo, but for Christopher Walken's extreme weirdness and a kind of interesting take on heaven and hell. I think you'd appreciate it.

But not even the devil can twist Sharpe. ;D

Thanks so much for the swell feedback!
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[identity profile] isiscolo.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 05:48 pm (UTC)(link)
This is FABULOUS. I am entirely awed by and in love with this little story, from the younger, more venial Sharpe (I recall reading somewhere a quote about Bean playing great villains, and Sharpe is a villain that happens to be one of the heroes) to the casual and tiny reveals of the Devil's identity that speak to the reader but that Sharpe doesn't recognize. (I adore the unreliable narrator aspect of this, the complicity of the reader in the underlying truths of the story that are hidden from the narrator!) I love Lucifer's recounting of Sharpe's history, and the wonderful double entendres about souls, and claiming, and the analogy with the King's Shilling. Just simply lovely.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 07:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so thrilled you like it! I'm not always sure that I'm not overloading with details - it seems a lot of people prefer really spare writing most of the time. But I'm really happy the little touches enhanced the piece - that's wonderful to hear. Bernard Cornwell did such a great job delineating the younger and older Sharpes, and I'd love to read more about young, wild Sharpe - Sharpe's Tiger is one of my favorites. Thanks a million for your lovely remarks - they gave me a true glow!

[identity profile] le-russe-satan.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 06:00 pm (UTC)(link)
THIS WAS SO AWESOME, I HAVE NO WORDS!!! *falls on the ground and worships you*

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Woot, I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks so much! :D
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[personal profile] makamu 2009-06-04 06:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this as much as the others did. Apart from the things Isis mentioned above I was also struck by the gem symbology. Since diamonds have hard edges and derive from coal, they make a nice analogy for Sharpe now and the person he becomes, while the ruby (with its occult connotation of fire and blood) fits him who brought fire and steals life's essence very well. Very well-done :)

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 07:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! I have to confess that although the diamond bit was deliberate, the ruby was entirely taken from Sharpe's Tiger, but now that you mention it, that is a kind of neat, albeit unintentional balance there. Wish I'd thought of it. :) Thanks for your kind comments - they're very much appreciated!

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! :)

[identity profile] vjezkova.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this was very good, very original indeed!

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com 2009-06-04 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
detached itself from the shadows

wound up sliding down the soft-skinned inner thighs


eeeee! lucifer is one of my favorite of viggo's incarnations and this pairing works beautifully. deftly done, my dear! i love your writing.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-05 11:17 pm (UTC)(link)
He's so awesome in the movie - I only wish he'd been in it more, don't you? Thank you so much for your kind words - I really appreciate the feedback! :)

[identity profile] eglvm.livejournal.com 2009-06-05 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
Damn, you need to do a sequel. ;)

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-05 11:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Aha, well, you never know! Thank you. :)

[identity profile] mrkinch.livejournal.com 2009-06-05 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh!*shivers* I like the ending's ambiguity in not saying whether Sharpe sees the diamond as the Devil's schilling, and not specifying what exactly he does with it. Speculation runs rampant!

[identity profile] meb28.livejournal.com 2009-06-05 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Indeed it does.

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[identity profile] meb28.livejournal.com 2009-06-05 04:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I also liked the bit about the singing although what he was singing isn't precisely true. Again awesome story.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-05 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Not true at all, as it happens! Thanks very much indeed. :D

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[identity profile] anthos65.livejournal.com 2009-06-05 08:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Dreadful encounter! Masterfully written! You created an evanescent atmosphere , filled with dangerous sensuality ; mysteriously erotic!
Awesome , baby!! Fantastic work!

*hugs*
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[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-05 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I was raised Catholic, so I'm fascinated by the occult. :D I'm really glad you liked it, Anto! Thank you! *kisses*

[identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com 2009-06-06 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
My god, I feel like I'm reading a cut-scene from Tiger. This is Sharpe's early voice bang on! I just... I love this. I love Sharpe's greed, I love his gruffness, I love how Lucifer is so clearly amused by the whole thing, I love everything about it. ^_^ Wonderful.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-06 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you very much indeed! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have a fondness for young, untamed Sharpe, and it makes me happy to hear it worked. Thank you! *beams*

(Anonymous) 2009-06-06 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG exellent! Lucifer/Sharpe! Yay! And you have his voice down pat. Great!

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-06 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for saying so! :)

[identity profile] hurinhouse.livejournal.com 2009-06-06 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
what a superb pairing, and written so well - the voices portrayed perfectly. i love that sharpe has no clue that he's forbidden fruit - just like him in the younger days. add twenty years to him and i think he'd catch on.

i'd love to see interludes progress between these two if the nuse ever strikes.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-06 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
First off, LOVE the icon. Egads, he was beyond beautiful in that shot.

I'm so very pleased you enjoyed the piece! I think you're right - twenty years and he absolutely would have known the score. :) I hadn't thought about successive interludes, but you've given me food for thought. Thank you, and thanks for the lovely remarks. :)
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[personal profile] afra_schatz 2009-06-08 07:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Here via [livejournal.com profile] rugbytackle :).

This was all kinds of gorgeous. I really liked how you portrayed Sharpe, first and foremost. I love that he is slightly unpleasant, not at all "noble" in his behaviour or in his language and that yet from the start there is something in his actions that show us so clearly why the devil has his problems with him. It makes him so likable that he can still enjoy the little things, that maybe he seems a bit egoistic at the beginning when he's having dinner while other people are dying, but that really he is just realistic and quite down to earth and all that. And yeah, he has a liking for gems and the lasses but it's nothing close to an obsession or anything.

And then Lucifer. God, he's gorgeous. I think what I liked best was his monologue. I don't really go for those in fics all that often because one person talking for such a long time hardly ever works. But it was perfect here - we feel just as enthralled as Sean does. And the way he retells Sharpe's life, all that subtle blasphemy mixed with this so likeable humour - and Sharpe's reaction to him is pure gold as well, he does react (and strongly so) but he isn't gonna be nice and proper about it.

I really, really enjoyed this :). Thank you for sharing!

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-09 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you ever so much for this lovely feedback! I'm so pleased you liked the description of Sharpe. I'm really fond of him in all his incarnations, but I do have a particular soft spot for young and wild Sharpe. He's somewhat primitive, barely civilized, but likeable for all that, as you say.

Thanks for mentioning the monologue! I totally agree with you; they almost never work. Usually they're pretty contrived. But I hoped this would be okay because hey, it's the Devil, and he'd be pretty mesmerizing for any length of time, I'd bet, and slightly hypnotic, I'd hoped. So I'm thrilled it worked for you.

I'm absolutely delighted you enjoyed the piece. Thanks very much indeed for your thoughtful comments. :)

[identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com 2009-06-12 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
jeez, how did i miss this?? thanks for the raw, in-your-face encounter. sharpe is as slippery as lucifer finds him, in terms of good/bad. it was an apt thing to play upon. lucifer's dishing the dirt and in general dirty mouth felt perfectly right in the filthy, reeking indian night. not knowing a lot about sharpe's past, lucifer's semi-monologue about sharpe sr. was really something to chew on - love it in all its tawdry glory.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-14 06:40 am (UTC)(link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It was a lot of fun to play them off each other - in some ways I think they might be ideally suited. :)

love it in all its tawdry glory

Hah - excellent way to put it. Thanks for your thoughtful comments - they are most appreciated!

[identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com 2009-06-13 07:18 am (UTC)(link)
Just caught up and this was wonderful. Viggo is delicious as Lucifer. I have Prophecy, but always fast forward to the Viggo bit.:)

Loved the singing off-key and the tone of this, with young, wild Sharpe, which was perfect.

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-06-14 06:41 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I adore the icon! Viggo is fantastic as Lucifer. I have no doubt that many of those crazy touches were his idea. :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and its tone! Thanks so much for letting me know. *hug*

[identity profile] kittylass.livejournal.com 2009-09-13 01:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful! I think that it was especially clever to include how it is most likely that Sharpe is somehow... protected, like he has God's favour ('lucky') and even though he does his worst, Lucifer is not able to claim him. And I also kind of like how Sharpe is just so young and sort of naive all the way through *g*

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2009-09-14 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, thank you, thank you! :D So glad you picked up on "God's favour" - because it's true, isn't it? Got through all those scrapes without dying or losing a limb or whatever. He's charmed! I'm glad you liked the naivete - I dunno if you've read the Sharpe books set in his early days, but he is sort of...emotionally clueless in some ways, and definitely trying to find his feet. Thanks so much for the great feedback! :D

permission to translate your fic

[identity profile] anchan-uk.livejournal.com 2014-11-14 06:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, five years later... Dear Author, thank you, thank you!.. That is first fic on Richard Sharpe that had got under my skin.

These two are good together, Sharpe and the Dark One. Unexpected, though. I had a flashback to an old novel called "The Monk" by Matthew Gregory Lewis. Both texts are highly symbolic. I agree that the Lucifer would enjoy company of Sharpe, but cannot claim his soul.

After watching "Frankenstein" with Benedict Cumberbatch, I had tried to read "The Monk" visualizing Benedict as the Monk. So far the experience was strange. The whole thing turned out to be too grotesque to be believable. I decided to treat it as a daydreaming of an honest monk in his grotto - just like "Alice in Wonderland". Perhaps I should do it again - with Viggo as Lucifer. Anyway...

...may I ask your permission to translate your fic to Russian, please? You will get the link once it is ready. I will translate it myself and ask couple of friends to beta it. I can also translate the readers comments for you, if you wish. The publication will contain link to the original text in the header for those, who prefer original.

I have checked the web. Nobody had attempted it yet, it seems. If someone had asked you, and got permission - please let me know.

RE: permission to translate your fic

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2014-11-15 04:40 am (UTC)(link)
I'm very pleased that you liked it - thanks for saying so! It's always excellent to get some feedback on an older piece.

I've never ever heard of "The Monk" but I saw that Amazon had a free download, so I snapped it up. Thank you. I wouldn't mind visualizing Benedict as a monk. Yum. :D

Certainly you may translate it. I'd love the link when you're through, and I'd love to see the comments as well! That's very nice of you to offer. Thanks again!

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