Alex, you're a goddess, truly. I am just loving this story to bits. Deargawd, I wanted to literally pick them up and shove them out the door when they were at the fish and chips place. But ahhhhh, once they got there to Jim's flat. You have an amazing ability to capture both their hesitancy and inborn gentlemanliness (wrd?), and at the same time write some of the hottest sex going. I am a pile of melted mush. And yes, that's a good thing.
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Date: 2012-06-23 01:59 pm (UTC)Deargawd, I wanted to literally pick them up and shove them out the door when they were at the fish and chips place. But ahhhhh, once they got there to Jim's flat.
You have an amazing ability to capture both their hesitancy and inborn gentlemanliness (wrd?), and at the same time write some of the hottest sex going.
I am a pile of melted mush. And yes, that's a good thing.