FIC: Nightmare

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Title: Nightmare
Author: Alex
Pairing/Character(s): Qui-Gon/Obi-Wan.
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 300
Summary: Obi-Wan has a terrible dream.
Note: Levity ahead.
Written as a [late] Halloween treat for ob1mcgregor







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“Obi-Wan. Obi-Wan!” Switching on the glow-globe, Qui-Gon shook the young man’s shoulder roughly.

Obi-Wan woke with a gasp and sat up abruptly, bathed in sweat, his sea-blue eyes wide with horror. He blinked, then saw Qui-Gon. “Master – a nightmare.”

With a soft smile, Qui-Gon gathered his naked apprentice into his arms and tenderly brushed a callused hand over one glistening pectoral muscle. “Tell me, Obi-Wan.”

Passing a trembling hand over his mouth, Obi-Wan shook his head. “It was horrible, Master. I dreamed that we were...slaves.”

Qui-Gon could not prevent an inquisitive laddering of his brow. “Oh?”

Obi-Wan flushed. “Not...it was not as you might think, Master. We were merely puppets, automatons of some species of foul, bloated intelligence. The Force was a mockery, our very presence in the galaxy stripped of its rank and dignity.”

“We have just come from a distressing and perilous mission, Obi-Wan. This is not an unusual dream, I think.”

“But there’s more, Master, much more. We were compelled to conduct ourselves among the grossest caricatures of interplanetary race, and there were times the universe was but a vast green void. And then I encountered a creature – Master, I could not even meet its eyes, for it was as if they were not truly there, and yet the creature did exist. And when it spoke – I confess I felt a dreadful desire to kill.”

“It was only a dream, Obi-Wan,” Qui-Gon soothed him, and gently eased Obi-Wan onto his back. “Let me eradicate its memory.” He leaned down and suckled one sweetly erect nipple, then trailed his fingertips down Obi-Wan’s belly until he found Obi-Wan’s sex. “Does that help you, my apprentice?”

“Oh...oh, yes, Master.”

Soon there was silence broken only by a soft moan, and the deep thrum of engines as the ship glided toward Naboo.



End.

Comments

[lauramcewan.livejournal.com]

*Snicker*

[green-key.livejournal.com]

LOL! Obi-Wan, prepare for your living nightmare.

[kimberlite.livejournal.com]

Oh dear! ;)

[mon-of-the-dead.livejournal.com]

I love you. :D

[pronker]

*gigglesnort*

[jessicaqueen.livejournal.com]

LOL. Yes, it is a horrific nightmare, isn't it?

[izzardwizzard.livejournal.com]

I'm not sure how it happened, but this is actually funny and heart-wrenching simultaneously! A "vast green void".....hehehe. A vast green void with these strange fabric-covered balls and a bearded man with impressive jowls yelling at us! The horror!

And then there's Qui/Obi kissing and I glazed over for a bit, and then you gut-punch me with a Naboo reference.

Well done! :D

[izzardwizzard.livejournal.com]

Oh, and I should add that anything that begins with "Obi-Wan moaned and thrashed" is tops in my book. There's never enough Obi-Wan moaning and thrashing, even now. ;)

[raina-at.livejournal.com]

*lol*
Listen to the impulse, Obi-Wan! Listen to the impulse!

[caras-galadhon.livejournal.com]

*snort* Well, I sure as hell laughed. ♥

[obi1mcgregor.livejournal.com]

SQUEEEEE! What a lovely find in my e-mail box this morning! Thank you!

Poor Obi is about to re-live his nightmare.

[rubyelf.livejournal.com]

Hahaha... thank you for this!

[hsv-fangirl.livejournal.com]

loved the "treat" part. Qui always knows the right thing to do :-)

[inyadreems.livejournal.com]

We all need Qui-Gon to eradicate the memory of the awful creature. Or failing that, we get to watch him help Obi-Wan.

*applause and laughs*

[crazy4ew.livejournal.com]

hee.... silly girl :) Meesa thinks you are funny!!! :D

[yaoichick.livejournal.com]

Obi-Wan wanted to kill Jar-Jar? Shock. Gasp! Say it ain't so! LOL

Lovely to read some new Qui/Obi from you. *squish*

xoxoxo

[woowoochow.livejournal.com]

funny

[padawanewan.livejournal.com]

LOL thank you! This made a bad night at work end with a grin.