That certainly woke me up this morning! I ran over here on govi20 's rec and I wasn't disappointed.

This is incredibly scary and powerful. This line

The green eyes glittered like the splashes of rain on the windscreen; soft menace in the deep voice.

sends shivers down my spine.

You have perfectly captured Dawson's power and quiet menace and the terseness of the dialogue adds to the realism. Thank you so much.