ext_7766 ([identity profile] hippediva.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] splix 2010-03-05 07:58 pm (UTC)

*gasp*

I'm nearly speechless. You captured them perfectly---the distances between them, the forces that keep them at each other.

Vicious. Lovely. Oh, and that sailorboy......

No one writes the way you do, luv. No one at all. This was a perfect edgy little game with no sentiment but plenty of emotion. You embodied a sociopath beautifully!

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