ext_47035 ([identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] splix 2012-06-29 07:00 pm (UTC)


Finally I have had some time to catch up a little and I came here first to see how the boys were doing. This was such a lovely chapter too. I agonized with Jamie as he strained to see Jim at the station and met his parents instead and I shared his disappointment and then elation, when Jim was there after all.

How lovely that they got their tête-à-tête fish and chip supper and afterwards such a sweet, slightly nervous and fumbly, but so erotic, first time scene.

Now dashing off to read the next chapter!

ETA I am an idiot! This is the next chapter. It's the previous one I haven't commented on!

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