ext_47077 ([identity profile] govi20.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] splix 2012-02-24 08:54 am (UTC)

That is really a brilliant start. I never saw the series, so I am not familiar with ET's character, but your great ability for writing characters brought him to life. A pompous gentleman he seems, but I like that he's already affected by Sharpe, though it doesn't surprise me.

The unholy trio exchanged apprehensive glances, and then the scoundrel with the knife examined me coolly, the blade ensuring I made no threatening motion in response to his slow, insulting inspection. “He’s a pretty one, no?” )h.. that had me shivering. (not in an unpleasant way, though).

I will declare, here and only here, however, that I have a certain lingering fascination now for my reluctant benefactor, Captain Richard Sharpe. *nods*

Can't wait for more!

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