ext_20408 ([identity profile] mrkinch.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] splix 2010-11-09 05:16 am (UTC)

This is a gem. I love how you reveal Kirill's pain gradually so that the last few sentences hit hard. And "the sublime accord of butter, sugar, milk, and toasted walnuts" is a wonderful phrase.
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